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Atmosphere Ozone Layer Depletion Prevention
By: David Rader II on July 20, 2007 @ 10:04 AM
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If ice mountains melt away
Sea level world wide rises
And the wind has less resistance
Storms will be growing stronger
Erosion will no longer have it's place
Stone mountains will simply be torn away
The land will be swept as dust into the sea
Perhaps it's the Earth just getting closer to the sun
That makes the temperatures rise
Our race may be destroying our atmosphere
Which contributes to the heat
We may be destroying our atmosphere vastly
We may be hardly contributing
Either way we should try to help
Or we may look back and wish we tried
To grant our own wish when we could
Originally written April 13, 2006
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Comments:
#1 a teenage girl October 06, 2008 @ 12:15 PM
i think this poem is good... and it highlights the problems we are facing now... global warming is a disastrous problem.. and as i live in Maldives (a tropical paradise in the Indian Ocean) i know the fears we are facing due to the polar ice caps melting and the sea level rising.. i think we should join our hands together and be united as one to save the Earth... =D |
#2 a concern people about environment August 06, 2009 @ 9:05 PM
i think the poem is half basically true if we people do nothing about this issues the half will become true itself. like the \"teenage girl\" said \"let join hands together and be united as one to save the Earth\" |
#3 a SIMPLE October 08, 2009 @ 6:23 AM
its so good
i like it |
#4 A pre-teen girL January 07, 2010 @ 8:07 AM
It seems that the writer of this poem is preety much correct in some ways . . .
But he has a really good point about the Ozone Layer |
#5 i love the poem March 01, 2010 @ 5:45 PM
this poem was rilly good i loved and thank you you gave me a ida for my progect love ya rnps add a pick |
#7 princeton January 03, 2011 @ 9:33 PM
thanks it help me to my exam,,
..making a poem related to ozone ..
God Bless.. ¢¾¢¾¢¾ |
#8 lil prod boo January 04, 2011 @ 5:03 PM
ammmazing im ghetto and think it was good |
#9 shafayahmad January 13, 2011 @ 6:49 AM
bad ugly pond duffer poem |
#10 David R. January 14, 2011 @ 11:41 PM
Thanks for your comments! I had a feeling it would be a love/hate relationship for this. |
#11 suhani May 02, 2011 @ 11:59 AM
lovable and careful doing poem |
#12 BISHNAZZ June 06, 2011 @ 10:14 AM
This was so laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame and your mom hates you. |
#13 lexi-anne June 16, 2011 @ 12:06 PM
you call that apeom it does'nt even rhyme yeah you covered most areas but 4 real!!!! |
#14 muskaan September 08, 2011 @ 9:28 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm nice poem good for my assembly thats it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
#15 :) September 18, 2011 @ 7:54 AM
its pretty good |
#16 aditi jha November 07, 2011 @ 8:28 AM
i am takingggggggggggggg it to my recitation compitiyionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
#17 YOUNG STARS September 06, 2012 @ 11:16 AM
ITS 22222222222222222222222 BOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THAT IM THINKING TO SLEEP NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
#18 ¢@¡+|¡Π (caitlin) September 22, 2012 @ 10:38 AM
I loved it and ALL you others who don't can shut the F**K up. |
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